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Well, they've trudged through 20k words of exposition, infodumping, and plot contrivance, and they've got stuff to say and links to link you peeps to so you can prevent yourself from writing a Gappy Stu, too:
The interactive Mary Sue litmus test: http://www.springhole.net/writing/marysue.htm
An alternate test: http://www.katfeete.net/writing/marysue.html
TVTropes on Mary Sues: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MarySue

Want to continue the rage on your own? Ryo uploaded a new chapter, but we can't help you here. You're on your own: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8242772/6/Touhou_Shinryaku_Gensokyo_Invaders

Recorded on 7/19/2012 - Captured Live on Ustream at http://www.ustream.tv/channel/spaztique-makes-stuff-live