Why Ironheart's writing doesn't work... and how to fix it with rewrites
Marvel's Ironheart show on Disney+ has received mixed to negative reviews from viewers and critics. What are the reasons for these negative reviews? Issues with the writing of Ironheart hold the story back and prevent the show from achieving its potential. Writer and game developer, Jerrel Dulay, shares his analysis and explanation of Ironheart. With a few rewrites, could Ironheart could have been received more positively?
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