Apollyon: River of Life - a narrative experience with dark fantasy vibes

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This game has a great concept: adjust the board to tune the narrative events that pop-up for you. While the narrative could use some continued polish, I think my largest point of feedback surrounds the "table" mechanic. While the idea is great, the execution loads too much on the player too early. Would investigate reducing the number of inputs for a starting player.



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