Dros - I revisit this awesome game now that it's ready for full release!

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Okay, the mechanical design and levels are nearly perfect. This game offers challenges to skilled platformers and an achievable path for folks like me.

The only opportunities I saw was for further polish and development on the narrative design side. Trimming some of the exposition in dialogue and adding a bit more depth to the banter could go a long way in turning this from a fun game into a classic.



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