Editing viewer stories - Outsiders in a Strange Land - A chapter one edit

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This is a fun story world with a lot of potential. While some of the balance between conflict and exposition didn't fit my reading preference, I still am excited to see how the writer continues to evolve and develop the story.

Great work!



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