Hate the Player MC plays Iconoclasts Part 5

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Ok so easy comments, Elro is a selfish dick who only thinks of himself and his own interest and literally needs to stop wanting to fuck his sister, Black is literally an unlikable, uninteresting, and completely unsympathetic or relatable villain.

Lastly the pirate is a contradiction to the greatest degree, seriously her entire culture, religion and raising is based on a male and female coupling and procreation. Look I am not against a LGBTQ character, but they have to be written in a way that makes since and works.

This is not the way, I don't have any in my series cause I don't know how to write them, so maybe I don't have a right to say this, but I have written enough to understand that you write what you know, and this doesn't feel like they know about this type of relationship.


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