Lunar Soil - A prototype looking for its voice - Gameplay and Review

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Overall 4/10 - While there were some general issues with narrative, tone, and some of the puzzle flow and logic, I honestly believe those can be resolved by future builds and continued development. The thing that stuck out to me as the biggest challenge this project might face was the fact that I struggled to find a unique voice / angle in this project so far. In indie dev, the personality and vision of the developer needs to prove that this project will be able to deliver on a different promise to the player that bigger studios are providing. I don't think this got there quite yet, but I'm excited to see how the project evolves!



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