Pacing of the story, action, The Rapid Arrows sail forth
The ratio of action versus exposition my tales are going to need to be able to hold my interest, a bit more details on the combat/danger part.
The Rapid Arrows test their paddle-car 2.0 in deep waters, The Brotherhood plot a scheme.
Neverwinter Nights playlist
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dt0PUH_sMgY&list=PLSkeqJCSAueZQreJ824QHxZxjwvOSpjS0
Asterix & Obelix playlist
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5m8FKTWuac0&list=PLSkeqJCSAuebvsNN3GcbCXbT1XpoYcUKg
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| 2024-04-23 | My very own story, The Rapid Arrows suffer and craft |
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| 2024-04-13 | Original ideas at all costs, The Rapid Arrows and all kinds of exercises |
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| 2024-03-30 | Living the story, The Rapid Arrows and the beaver of courage |
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