Poll is a tie so we don't have a title yet - Second draft, dialog-free
7This is the draft where characters aren't allowed to have a single line of dialog. Focusing in on movements, descriptions, and character's physically emoting.
This is the first of what I call my 'refinement drafts'. Drafts that are not really meant for people to read, but meant to polish the writing. Ideally a reader could follow everything happening, understand the emotional states of the characters, etc. Without a single word spoken, then when the words are added back in during future drafts they will be used to add a new layer to the story.
Details and descriptions are usually my weakest point as a writer. I struggle with this. So even though this episode had very little dialog I still feel that this draft is absolutely necessary.
I will not be able to read chat while writing, I need to shut down all distraction. But feel free to chat away, and at the end of the stream I will read chat and respond so feel free to throw out questions, or reaction, count the ways that I suck, all that good stuff.
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