Potion Permit (Demo) - Narrative and Gameplay Review - Let's Play
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Overall 7/10 - The narrative definitely needs trimming, but outside of waiting through a LOT of introductions and expository cutscenes, the mechanics of the game seem generally solid. I like the optimization of usable #inventory by combining into a scroll bar, but I wonder if a "use" item could cover more ground?
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