Sea of Stars - An enticing but narratively frontloaded RPG - Is my review right?

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Sea of Stars
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Sea of Stars (2023)
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Review
Duration: 39:28
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The mechanics and art in this game are STELLAR, but the narrative has a few issues. The primary one being slowing the onboarding pace of the game to a crawl. Am I being too intense? Am I a crazed writer? We may never know.



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