Snoot Game - Nothing to Something - 38 - Olivia gets fridged, seriously, what the actual FRICK?
Like, this is just fridging. She's not dead, but she's getting smacked for Anon's character development despite being effectively innocent. You could work 'but Naser shouldn't hit up with her and you caused that' timeline self correction or something to justify it, but overall, this is just a fridged wife.
A woman getting herself slapped so a man can develop instead of the man getting his own just deserts.
Like, Anon's such a secondary character even his plot development isn't for him.
"**I** don't deserve nice things" says man whose SISTER just took a life changing turn.
That being said, the plot's actually doing stuff and the next chapter's going places ,so who knows. This might stop being bad. But is it an oasis in a desert, the beginnings of the savanna, or merely a mirage?
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