The Wolf of Derevnya - Navigate a shadowy world with strange wolves on the prowl

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United States Final Boss Editing
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The Wolf of Derevnya (2023)
Duration: 36:38
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Overall, the writing was strong and this is a fun project. I think if the developer is able to trim things back a little bit and focus on surfacing the main hook of the story a bit sooner, the pacing will be greatly improved.



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