Fidget Spinner RPG Beta - Gameplay & Narrative Review - Let's Play

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Overall - 6/10 for a Beta

The good:
-- Loved the task queue system. That feels like a true innovation for idle game systems.
-- The graphical fidelity was amazing! The UI looked great.

To Improve:
-- The early progression moved too slow. Wanted to use new abilities sooner.
-- The separate experience bars for skill trees seemed like a complicated way to represent what was essentially still a linear progression system.
-- RPM speed didn't factor into any progression, so it just seemed pointless to increase RPM -- want to have a STORY or a progression reason to care about RPM increases.

Overall, great project, and feel free to reach out if you have any questions on my feedback!







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