Apotheorasis - Gameplay and Narrative Tutorial - Let's play

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Overall (5/10 general || 7/10 beta) - The concept is absolutely brilliant, but this game had some initial execution issues. The beta score is higher since I imagine some of these issues will be resolved.

#Gameplay (6/10) - Sound design directionality generally worked well, but we had far to much time spent on tutorialization rather than getting us into the fun portions of the game (shooting off sound // solving sound puzzles // etc.)

#Narrative (4/10) - Some of the characters seemed odd and didn't fit the world. A lot of the set ups didn't have the momentum they needed to compell me into the story. And the writing itself often repeated itself or told me things I already discerned.

#Sound Design (5/10) - Directions worked well, but there were lots of sound cues that didn't fit with the environment I thought I was being placed in.







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screenwriting
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