Fixing What Went Wrong With Cinder Fall - RWBY Rewrite
644Many RWBY fans felt dissatisfied by Cinder’s backstory in RWBY Volume 8, but I started to wonder to myself: what would I do differently? What sort of story do I think would have been stronger to showcase during the Atlas and Mantle arc? I challenged myself to create another version of Cinder’s backstory within the confines of the canon elements the show presented. So while there are no pirates (😂), I hope you’ll enjoy my little writing exercise.
Also, a disclaimer: this rewrite is not for Midnight as an episode, but for the scope of Cinder’s backstory as a whole. So don’t imagine this in the original 9 minutes or whatever haha.
Edited By Raijin Rising. Please go support him: https://youtube.com/channel/UCj9h1Fbf7osnyAq9KhiGa6Q
00:00 - Intro + Rewrite Goals
02:10 - Backstory: Introducing The Characters
09:57 - Backstory: If You Keep On Believing... (Cinder's 'fairytale')
17:12 - Backstory: The Turning Point
24:47 - Backstory: Pep & Willa Outcome Option 1
26:43 - Backstory: Pep & Willa Outcome Option 2
29:49 - Backstory: How Cinder Met Salem
37:11 - How this impacts “Canon Cinder”
44:15 - Concluding Thoughts + Outro
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