Logical Inconsistencies - Put the script through grammarly or MS word first

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Published on September 5, 2024 3:43:47 PM ● Video Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4V5_uWm6ptk

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It's marketed for adults only but the writing is not up to the task. A bunch of murders happen in the very first scene as well as some very awkwardly worded sex. Samarah, the antagonist, is the most exhausting human I have ever read. All of the writing is clumsy. Deciphering the intent from what is written is the only real gameplay mechanic I experienced. The whole script needs to be put through grammarly, or better yet, have an editor go over it for "Logical Inconsistencies". This is not for me.

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