SW: TFA (EPIC RE-WRITE) (By Unseen Phantom) (WITH TIME STAMPS)
43After months and months of work I'm finally finished! Constructive feedback is appreciated.
THE LAST JEDI (NOW CALLED "WRATH OF THE FIRST ORDER") EPIC RE-WRITE: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yrtt9u9j5I4&t=0s
TIME STAMPS:
0:00 - 3:35: Invasion of Jaku base
3:35 - 4:49: Rey, Finn, Poe, and BB-8 meet each other.
4:49 - 6:20: Rey, Finn, Poe, and BB-8 run from Caedus and are rescued by Luke and Family
6:20 - 7:57: Han and Chewie take everyone to Coruscant then Finn, Poe, and BB-8 say goodbye to Rey
7:57 - 9:01: Finn presents his information to the senate
9:01 - 13:02: Rey arrives at the Jedi Academy on Yavin IV
13:02 - 14:21: Rey gets taken and Finn, Luke, Ben, and Jaina go rescue her.
14:21 - 15:42: Finn, Luke, Ben, and Jaina sneak in and the invasion of Starkiller base begins.
15:42 - 18:34: Ben Skywalker vs Darth Caedus (aka Jacen Solo)
18:34 - 23:23: The New Jedi Order vs The Sith Brotherhood and the return to Yavin IV
23:23 - 25:40: Luke's argument with Ben
25:40 - 27:13: Finn wants to become a Jedi
27:13 - 27:57: Jaina confronts Ben and Rey continues her training
27:57 - 31:49: Side Notes
LINK TO MY THE LAST JEDI (NOW CALLED "WRATH OF THE FIRST ORDER") EPIC RE-WRITE!: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yrtt9u9j5I4
Constructive criticism is appreciated. It will help me improve as a writer.
Program used to create the Opening Crawl: https://starwarsintrocreator.kassellabs.io/?ref=redirect
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