Writing Workshop - In Other Waters

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John Locksley

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Published on February 23, 2023 11:00:12 PM ● Video Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MIVPmnrknsY

Game:

In Other Waters (2020)

Duration: 40:55

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Going through some of the writing in this game, from an emotion and character standpoint. The writing is what tanked the game for me, so understanding why I disliked it not only helped me, but can maybe help others avoid the same mistake.

I'd like to do more videos on bad writing, but surprisingly I can't think of any games with writing I could talk about. If you have any ideas, please let me know!

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