WUKONG's Lore Update - a bit of a mess (D+, needs work)

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League of Legends
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League of Legends (2009)
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Vlog
Duration: 42:41
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FAST AND DUMB: http://universe.leagueoflegends.com/en_US/story/monkeyking-color/

In this video we discuss:

- 1st person vs 3rd person narration
- keeping a consistent voice and characterization
- balancing in-universe terminology with real-world language
- writing a frantic action scene
- setting up and executing a theme in a short story
- using character voice to heighten themes

Overall a very unpolished, rough short story. Needs better a much sharper-written fight scene and more consistent character voice and characterization. Also needs to figure out what it's theme is and stick to it.



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